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Advice for Medical Problems

Advice for Medical Problems 6daA3
Many individuals today would rather seek out medical advice themselves instead of seeing a licensed professional. In my opinion, this is a result of online convenience and it is a positive development on the whole. The main cause of this transition is the proliferation of information available on the internet. In the past, an ailing individual had little recourse other than to visit a doctor for tests. Now, there are a variety of question and answer websites as well as diagnosis ones that are free of cost and faster than a trip to a hospital. The slight conveniences of saving some money, time, and effort may not seem decisive, but mass behaviour is often driven by marginal advantages. For instance, posting a question to a forum such as Reddit. com where qualified professions may provide free advice is a powerful incentive to avoid a costly and time-consuming consultation with an experienced doctor. Though there are risks associated with misdiagnosis, seeking advice online is generally more reliable. Doctors vary in their quality and numerous studies in recent years support the counter-intuitive conclusion that websites actually provide more trustworthy advice. This is a result of the accumulation of many years’ worth of data and the standardizing of detection, prognosis, and treatment. For example, the website WebMD. com allows users to search for their symptoms online, discover a range of possible causes and then decide themselves on the best path forward. This may include a visit to a hospital if further tests are required that can only be conducted in person, but at least the patient has saved time and money at the initial stage of diagnosis. In conclusion, fewer people today visit doctors because there are cheap, convenient alternatives online and this is largely positive. There are risks that must be guarded against but this change cannot be reversed.
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would
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seek out medical
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themselves
instead
of seeing a licensed professional. In my opinion, this is a result of
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online
convenience and it is a
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positive
development
on the whole
.

The main cause of this transition is the proliferation of information available on the internet. In the past, an ailing individual had
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little
recourse other than to visit a doctor for
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tests
.
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Now
, there are a variety of question and answer websites
as well
as diagnosis ones that are free of cost and faster than a trip to a hospital. The slight conveniences of saving
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money, time, and effort may not seem decisive,
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mass
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behaviour
is
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driven by marginal advantages.
For instance
, posting a question to a forum such as Reddit.
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com
where qualified professions may provide free
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advice
is a powerful incentive to avoid a costly and time-consuming consultation with an experienced doctor.

Though there are
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risks
associated with misdiagnosis, seeking
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advice
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online
is
generally
more reliable. Doctors vary in their quality and numerous studies in recent years support the counter-intuitive conclusion that websites actually provide more trustworthy
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advice
. This is a result of the accumulation of
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many
years’ worth of data and the standardizing of detection, prognosis, and treatment.
For example
, the website WebMD.
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com
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allows
users to search for their symptoms
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online
, discover a range of possible causes and then decide themselves on the best path forward. This may include a visit to a hospital if
further
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tests
are required
that can
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only
be conducted
in person,
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but
at least the patient has saved time and money at the initial stage of diagnosis.

In conclusion
, fewer
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people
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today
visit doctors
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because
there are
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cheap
, convenient alternatives
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online
and this is
largely
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positive
. There are
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risks
that
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be guarded
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this
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cannot
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IELTS essay Advice for Medical Problems

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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