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All Cars That Burn Fossil Fuels Should Be Banned And Electric Cars Should Replace Them

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Cars running on fossil fuels emit a lot of poisonous gases into the atmosphere and accelerate the pace of global warming. Hence, some people argue that all petrol and diesel cars should be banned and replaced by electric cars. While I do appreciate the rationale behind this argument, in my opinion, it may take many more years or even decades for this to be a viable option. Electric cars are eco-friendly because they do not emit poisonous gases. They run on electrically charged batteries. And for this reason, the electric car technology must be promoted. Petrol or diesel cars, on the other hand, are one of the biggest causes of atmospheric pollution. They burn fossil fuels and in this process release gases that elevate the temperature of the atmosphere. By simply eliminating these cars from roads, we will be able to check global warming and improve air quality. Unfortunately, the electric car technology is still in its nascent stage. Of course, some companies have launched them and they are already on the roads. The demand for these cars is also increasing because they are environment friendly. However, at the moment, they are considerably more expensive than petrol or diesel cars. Also, electric cars beating petrol cars in power and efficiency are yet to make their debut. There are not enough charging stations either. All of these factors affect the wide scale adoption of electric cars. The truth is that they are still way beyond the reach of a middle class family. Of course, the technology will improve and prices will drop but this may take many more years or decades. Until then, it is not feasible to ban cars running on fossil fuels. To conclude, it is essential to stop using cars running on gasoline. However, this is not something we can achieve overnight as the electric car technology still has to develop a lot. Once, electric cars become commonplace, I see no reason not to phase out petrol and diesel cars.
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a lot of
poisonous gases into the atmosphere and accelerate the pace of global warming.
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some
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people
argue that all
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petrol
and
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diesel
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cars
should
be banned
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electric
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cars
. While I do appreciate the rationale behind this argument, in my opinion, it may take
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many
more years or even decades for this to be a viable option.

Electric
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cars
are eco-friendly
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because
they do not emit poisonous gases. They run on
electrically
charged batteries. And
for this reason
, the
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electric
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car
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technology
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must
be promoted
.
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Petrol
or
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diesel
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cars
,
on the other hand
, are one of the biggest causes of atmospheric pollution. They burn fossil fuels and in this process release gases that elevate the temperature of the atmosphere. By
simply
eliminating these
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cars
from roads, we will be able to
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check
global warming and
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improve
air quality.

Unfortunately, the
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electric
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car
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technology
is
still
in its nascent stage.
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some
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companies
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them and
they are already on the roads. The demand for these
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cars
is
also
increasing
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because
they are environment friendly.
However
, at the moment, they are
considerably
more expensive than
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petrol
or
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diesel
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cars
.
Also
,
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electric
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cars
beating
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petrol
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cars
in power and efficiency are
yet
to
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make
their debut. There are not
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enough
charging stations either. All of these factors affect the wide scale adoption of
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electric
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. The truth is that they are
still
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class
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and prices will drop
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this may take
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many
more years or decades. Until then, it is not feasible to ban
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cars
running on fossil fuels.

To conclude
, it is essential to
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stop
using
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cars
running on gasoline.
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, this is not something we can achieve overnight as the
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electric
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car
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technology
still
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has to
develop a lot. Once,
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electric
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cars
become commonplace, I
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see
no reason not to phase out
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petrol
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diesel
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IELTS essay All Cars That Burn Fossil Fuels Should Be Banned And Electric Cars Should Replace Them

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  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
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