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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, electric cars should be used instead of cars that burn fossil fuels. I completely agree with the statement, because cars using fossil fuel s produce a lot of pollution, where as electric cars are Eco friendly. Using fossil fuels as main source of energy in vehicles is quite common from the past generations. These fuels are threat to humans, animal species and to the environment as well. Fossil fuels when burnt produce green houses gases like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide in huge amounts, these gases are main reason for raise in temperature and global warming. people living in cities which are densely populated have recorded to be suffering with chronic respiratory diseases like asthma, COPD. In a recent study by WHO has stated that in 2018, people residing in metropolitan cities where auto mobiles are mainly used, 72 percent of population were suffering from respiratory diseases caused mainly by the air pollution by these fossil fuels. Electric cars are the new trend in the world, which are Eco friendly and does not cause any pollution that is harmful to the environment. Electric cars uses lithium batteries which do not emit any harmful gases or any dangerous particles into air. Electric cars do not have any negative impact on the environment and global warming. A recent survey conducted in India where electric cars were used for a month and quality of air was checked it improved by 7percent compared to the quality air when fuel cars were used. To conclude, i agree with the statement as electric cars will have many benefits to the environment and also to the human and animal species.
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is argued
that,
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electric
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cars
should be
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used
instead
of
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cars
that burn
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fossil
fuels.

I completely
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agree
with the statement,
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because
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cars
using
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fossil
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fuel
s produce
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a lot of
pollution,
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where as
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electric
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cars
are Eco friendly.

Using
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fossil
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fuels
as main source of energy in vehicles is quite common from the past generations. These
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fuels
are threat to humans, animal species and to the
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environment
as well
.
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Fossil
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fuels
when burnt produce green
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houses
gases like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide in huge amounts, these gases are main reason for raise in temperature and global warming.
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people
living in cities which are
densely
populated have recorded to be suffering with chronic respiratory diseases like asthma, COPD. In a recent study by WHO has stated that in 2018,
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people
residing in metropolitan cities where auto mobiles are
mainly
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used
, 72 percent of population were suffering from respiratory diseases caused
mainly
by the
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air
pollution by these
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fossil
fuels.

Electric
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cars
are the new trend in the world, which are Eco friendly and does not cause any pollution
that is
harmful to the
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environment
.
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Electric
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cars
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uses
lithium batteries which do not emit any harmful gases or any
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dangerous
particles into
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air
.
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Electric
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cars
do not have any
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negative
impact on the
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environment
and global warming. A recent survey conducted in India where
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electric
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cars
were
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used
for a month and quality of
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air
was
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checked
it
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improved
by 7percent compared to the quality
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air
when
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fuel
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cars
were
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used
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To conclude
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i
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agree
with the statement as
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electric
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cars
will have
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many
benefits to the
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environment
and
also
to the human and animal species.
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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