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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. lapw

Electricity driven cars are non-polluting. Electric cars run on electricity hence discharging practically zero pollutants to the air. Decrease in emissions results in cleaner and safer atmosphere. They also have advantage of long engine life since there is no knocking effect like in combustion engine of fossil fuel driven cars. On the other hand, toxins like CO2, lead and arsenics are released into the environment in high quantity by the vehicles running on fossil fuels. The recently launched hybrid electric cars by Honda have proven to be environment friendly as they have zero expulsion of gases.

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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

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