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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays most of the people are using the car for convenience and most of the cars use Fossil fuel to run. This essay will draw some ideas about why we should boycott fossil fuel cars, Burning fossil Fuel Not Environmental friendly, Availability is Limited and Already other reliable fuel and resources are available. Firstly, because of the development, around 68% of the population owns a car in the USA which uses fossil fuel which is not Environment Friendly and availability is also in the limited amount. When we burn fossil fuel it releases harmful gases such as carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, and methane with increasing congestion and Earth’s temperature, because of that glaciers are melting and the sea level is increasing which directly going to impact our migration. And also those resources are in limited amounts but our way of consumption is sustainable maybe our upcoming generation will not able to use those. In a nutshell, all those things are going to increase global warming and ozone layer depletion which is going to make our life harder. Already there are alternatives are available which is less harmful such as Biodiesel which is one of the great alternatives, it is easy to make and it gave the almost same amount of energy and especially good for heavy vehicles like trucks. For the normal and causal car, we can use electricity as a source of power already some of the biggest companies are making their move towards electric cars such as Tesla, Micro, and Ford. In conclusion, We should prefer electric cars moreover Fossil Fuel's car. Take a step to make our environment better for the upcoming generation.
Nowadays most of the
people
are using the
car
for convenience and most of the
cars
use
Fossil
fuel
to run. This essay will draw
some
ideas
about why we should boycott
fossil
fuel
cars
, Burning
fossil
Fuel
Not Environmental friendly, Availability
is Limited
and Already other reliable
fuel
and resources are available.

Firstly
,
because
of the development, around 68% of the population
owns
a
car
in the USA which
uses
fossil
fuel
which is not Environment Friendly and availability is
also
in the limited amount. When we burn
fossil
fuel
it releases harmful gases such as carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, and methane with increasing congestion and Earth’s temperature,
because
of that glaciers are melting and the sea level is increasing which
directly
going to impact our migration. And
also
those resources are in limited amounts
but
our way of consumption is sustainable maybe our upcoming generation will not able to
use
those.

In a nutshell, all those things are going to increase global warming and ozone layer depletion which is going to
make
our life harder.

Already there are alternatives are available which is less harmful such as Biodiesel which is one of the great alternatives, it is easy to
make and
it gave the almost same amount of energy and
especially
good
for heavy vehicles like trucks. For the normal and causal
car
, we can
use
electricity as a source of power already
some
of the biggest
companies
are making their
move
towards electric
cars
such as Tesla, Micro, and Ford.

In conclusion
, We should prefer electric
cars
moreover
Fossil
Fuel's car.

Take a step to
make
our environment better for the upcoming generation.
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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