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All and sundry must protect their lives even retire people

All and sundry must protect their lives even retire people KyY0L

Some people think that when they retire, they should stay at home and receive their pension and continue their lives but they don't realize that If they didn't move, they would become an obese man with negative thoughts that magnifies everything After a while, they get sick and needed a chiropractor they threatened people with epidemic diseases due to obesity. These people should avoid risking themselves by exercising, which will be vital for them Early morning is the best time to move and exercise when the air is fully ventilated and there is enough oxygen In the parks, there are municipal devices that are for public use. Please explain this to your loved ones orally to obstacle any disease in them.

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Some
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people
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think
 that when they retire, they should stay at home and receive their pension and continue their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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but
 they don't realize that If they didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
, they would become an obese This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 thoughts that magnifies everything After a while, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 sick and needed a chiropractor they threatened This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with epidemic diseases due to obesity. These This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should avoid risking themselves by exercising, which will be vital for them Early morning is the best time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 and exercise when the air is fully
 ventilated and there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphoxygen.oxygen!oxygen?oxygen:oxygen,oxygen;
oxygen


In the parks, there are municipal devices that are for public This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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explain
 this to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones orally
 to obstacle any disease in them. 