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ALINA: Nowadays traveling has a significant role in people's lives. Travel makes people happy, but on the other hand there is a negative side. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of traveling. The benefits of traveling is expanding the horizon, feeling new emotions and getting memories. Traveling around the world, visiting different countries and places, a person feels spiritual peace and pleasure. For instance, when I visited different countries, visited breathtaking places, felt a various atmosphere, I was incredibly happy and felt pleasure. However, traveling also has some major disadvantages like lack of money and time. everyone knows that traveling is expensive. most people are forced to work, work and work.a greater focus on making money does not allow people to find time to relax. for example, in our time, people simply do not have time to travel due to workload. Nevertheless, even a very busy person can find time for rest and travel. To conclude, alth

ALINA: Nowadays traveling has a significant role in people's lives. Travel makes people happy, but on the other hand there is a negative side. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of traveling. The benefits of traveling is expanding the horizon, feeling new emotions and getting memories. Traveling around the world, visiting different countries and places, a person feels spiritual peace and pleasure. For instance, when I visited different countries, visited breathtaking places, felt a various atmosphere, I was incredibly happy and felt pleasure. However, traveling also has some major disadvantages like lack of money and time. everyone knows that traveling is expensive. most people are forced to work, work and work. a greater focus on making money does not allow people to find time to relax. for example, in our time, people simply do not have time to travel due to workload. Nevertheless, even a very busy person can find time for rest and travel. To conclude, alth bX9Q

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everyone
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, it has an extremely
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 impact on expanding worldview and a full understanding of the world. I believe that these benefits of traveling outweigh its drawbacks. 