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Alcohol drinking should be banned

Alcohol drinking should be banned p1Jb9

Alcohol drinks are now an inseparable part of some people. But many people think that alcoholic drinks should be prohibited. And I completely agree with their point of view. Because the choice of a healthy life is in their own hands. To start with, people think alcohol should be banned. It caused a large number of traffic accidents when people drank driven. It is a serious issue for many countries.

Alcohol drinks are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 an inseparable part of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that alcoholic drinks should be prohibited
. And I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with their point of view. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 the choice of a healthy life is in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 hands. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 alcohol should be banned
. It caused Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 traffic accidents when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 drank driven. It is a serious issue for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries. 