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Air travel is only beneficial for rich people however with the development of air travel common individuals can get a no benefit do you agree or disagree

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It is believe that aviation sector is merely fruitful for elite peiple, whilst with the progress of airline industry ordinary people can not alive the advantages I strongly disagree with the notion because it helps to expand the business as well as provide job opportunity to general public. 2 comments with the first benefit of air travel to common public it helps to enhance the business to other Nations the transportation of goods is quite easily for the common business people along with the lights the business is expanded from domestic reasons to International boundaries as well as the annual turnover also increased to with the expanding of business for example Jalandhar city under Punjab state is famous for dealer sports products and export sport sport goods such as the bats, footballs to other Nations. it breaks the domestic boundaries. Furthermore airline industry create job opportunities to the common people according to their academic when airport branches are established in numerous parts of the nation it would require manpower for workforce to regulate the branch. so air travel recruit common people for work according to their skills such as a blue colour and white colour jobs a common people get a direct advantages of for Air port industry and arises the living standard after getting a job in aviation sector forest answer according to the researchers soon of the introduce a airport in a damper 4500 workers of was hired to working at the airport. In conclusion aviation factors not only fruitful for offlueut person but also profitable for commoners to break the boundaries in business field as well as provide a job vacancy to nearby people.
It is
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believe
that aviation sector is
merely
fruitful for elite
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peiple
, whilst with the progress of airline industry ordinary
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people
can not alive the advantages I
strongly
disagree with the notion
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because
it
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helps
to expand the
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business
as well
as provide
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job
opportunity to
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general public
. 2 comments with the
first
benefit of air travel to
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common
public it
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helps
to enhance the
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business
to other Nations the transportation of
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goods
is quite
easily
for the
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common
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business
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people
along with the lights the
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business
is expanded
from domestic reasons to International boundaries
as well
as the annual turnover
also
increased to with the expanding of
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business
for example
Jalandhar city under Punjab state is
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famous
for dealer sports products and export
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sport sport
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goods
such as the bats, footballs to other Nations.
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it
breaks the domestic boundaries.
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Furthermore
airline industry create
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job
opportunities to the
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common
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people
according to their academic when airport branches
are established
in numerous parts of the nation it would require manpower for workforce to regulate the branch.
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so
air travel recruit
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common
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people
for work according to their
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skills
such as a blue
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colour
and white
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colour
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jobs
a
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common
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people
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get
a direct
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advantages
of for Air port industry and arises the living standard after getting a
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job
in aviation sector forest answer according to the researchers
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soon
of
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the introduce
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a
airport in a damper 4500 workers of
was hired
to working at the airport.
In conclusion
aviation factors not
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only
fruitful for
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offlueut
person
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but
also
profitable for commoners to break the boundaries in
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business
field
as well
as provide a
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job
vacancy to nearby
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people
.
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IELTS essay Air travel is only beneficial for rich people however with the development of air travel common individuals can get a no benefit

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  American English
1 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
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