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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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The invention of an airplane is a major discovery of the third medium for locomotion, besides being an important invention it is also considered as a major milestone in humanity. Some believe that air traffic is a leading source of noise and air pollution, As every new invention has its own bane and boons i would like to account few of these. To embark on, this latest mode of transport has made peoples lives effortless and locomotive, as they can save time and energy by voyaging in air. Human always prefer convenience over conservation, therefore the amount of people using air transportation has rapidly increased over the upcoming years which lead to the increase in the net air traffic. The airplane has a set of very powerful engines with heavy cumbusion of fuel which leads to substantial air and noise pollution. Bountiful folks plan their holiday destinations and vacations as there is an availability of air tickets at a reasonable rate, this can be a minor reason for the air traffic. Increasing air traffic is very precarious to the environment, In addition to that construction of airports also cause air and noise for a limited period of time but also serve for a very long time when compared to the construction time. Some believe that government should hike the taxes on the air tickets in order to reduce the air traffic, I do not agree with this notion as most of the people traveling by air do not seek leisure and have a official or locomotive reasons. The government will only burden the plain folks to take other means of transport which consumes time and besides time consumption it may also pollute more than air transportation.
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pollution, As every new invention has its
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bane and boons
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would like to account few of these.

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effortless and locomotive, as they can save
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time
and energy by voyaging in
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. Human always
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transportation has
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increased over the upcoming years which lead to the increase in the net
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air
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. The airplane has a set of
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powerful engines with heavy
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of fuel which leads to substantial
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and noise pollution. Bountiful folks plan their holiday destinations and vacations as there is an availability of
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air
tickets at a reasonable rate, this can be a minor reason for the
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air
traffic.

Increasing
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traffic
is
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precarious to the environment,
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and noise for a limited period of
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believe that
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government
should hike the taxes on the
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tickets in order to
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reduce
the
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air
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, I do not
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agree
with this notion as most of the
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people
traveling by
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air
do not seek leisure and have
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official or locomotive reasons. The
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government
will
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burden the plain folks to take other means of transport which consumes
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time
and
besides
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time
consumption it may
also
pollute more than
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air
transportation.
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IELTS essay Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport constuction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.

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286 words
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