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Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code?

Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code? ql7r
School children ought to wear uniform to show discipline and to avoid unnecessary competition among themselves of wearing stylish cloths. However, teachers are not regulated by any dress code and are allowed to wear as per their choice. I think this is the right choice and this essay will elaborate more on this opinion. Firstly, children are quite competitive among themselves. In order to look cool and as per the fashion trend they might force their parents to buy them expensive cloths, if specific dress code was missing in schools. In such scenarios many children whose parents are not wealthy and rich might find very difficult to get these expensive clothing to their children, which might make them left outs among the friends and may even encourage bullying. Teachers on the other hand are not that competitive among themselves and are matured enough to understand what kind of clothing is appropriate at schools. Secondly, it is observed that specific dress code at any work location is harmful for the creativity among workers. Many organisations such as Google and Facebook have allowed their employees to come in casual attire to work. The casual dress will make the employees comfortable and help them stay creativity and improve their productivity. The same principle can be followed for teachers as well as teachers as well are required to be creative while teaching children and may often require to think out of the box. This can be achieved if their mind is free and wearing something in which they are comfortable will help them. In conclusion, I believe it is very necessary for children to wear a uniform, however, teachers are mature enough to decide on the dress code which is suitable for workplace. Additionally, allowing them to wear casual clothing might help them to be more creative while teaching students.
School
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children
ought to
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show
discipline and to avoid unnecessary competition among themselves of wearing stylish cloths.
However
,
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teachers
are not regulated by any
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dress
code and are
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allowed
to
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wear
as per their choice. I
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think
this is the right choice and this essay will elaborate more on this opinion.

Firstly
,
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children
are quite competitive among themselves. In order to look cool and as per the fashion trend they
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might
force their parents to
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buy
them expensive cloths, if specific
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dress
code was missing in schools. In such scenarios
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many
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children
whose parents are not wealthy and rich
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might
find
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very
difficult to
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get
these expensive clothing to their
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children
, which
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might
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make
them
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left
outs among the friends and may even encourage bullying.
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Teachers
on the other hand
are not that competitive among themselves and
are matured
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enough
to understand what kind of clothing is appropriate at schools.

Secondly
, it
is observed
that specific
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dress
code at any work location is harmful for the creativity among workers.
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Many
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organisations
such as Google and Facebook have
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allowed
their employees to
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come
in casual attire to work. The casual
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dress
will
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make
the employees comfortable and
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help
them stay creativity and
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improve
their productivity. The same principle can
be followed
for
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teachers
as well
as
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teachers
as well
are required
to be creative while teaching
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children
and may
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often
require to
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think
out of the box. This can
be achieved
if their mind is free and wearing something in which they are comfortable will
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help
them.

In conclusion
, I believe it is
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very
necessary for
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children
to
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wear
a uniform,
however
,
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teachers
are mature
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enough
to decide on the
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dress
code which is suitable for workplace.
Additionally
, allowing them to
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wear
casual clothing
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might
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help
them to be more creative while teaching students.
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IELTS essay Many people believe in the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.0
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