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AIA Vietnam got two major technology prizes after making a breakthrough in digital transformation.

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The Asian Technology Excellence Awards 2021 have just presented AIA Vietnam with an award. This is the region's most prestigious prize, honoring companies who foresee the next wave of technology and embrace the digitalization trend in numerous industries. Asia Business Magazine chooses the winner based on the most common technological innovation projects and activities. AIA Vietnam not only made it into the top 20 awarded firms this year, but it also won two projects. In the "Cloud - Life Insurance" category, the EDEN project won, and in the "Online Services - Life Insurance" category, the Remote Sales Platform project won. AIA Vietnam is also the country's only insurance business to achieve this honor. From product categories to service quality, unique and varied business strategies, AIA Vietnam is hailed as a pioneer in originality and innovation. AIA is currently undergoing transition, with a focus on TDA (Technology, Digital, and Analytics) digital transformation. To improve the consumer experience and create superior digital products, the organization will use technology, digital, and analytics resources.
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IELTS essay AIA Vietnam got two major technology prizes after making a breakthrough in digital transformation.

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