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I do not agree. Of course, the curriculum using online platforms will grow in proportion and materialize in the future, but there will certainly be people who want to be educated offline in the future and need it. Schools and teachers will be indispensable in the future, just as there are still people who prefer to read paper books and take notes, as e-books are provided and more people take notes on e-pads. It's just that the proportion is a little less.
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