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To whom it may concern, I strongly believe that Spiritual education is as important as technical education. Spiritual education motivates people to have a positive vision in life. Nowadays, people are used to reading more about Technology, Fashion, Sports, and Film news. In my perspective, Spiritual education makes people think in broadway towards real-life problems. Moreover, this will make current and future generations adopt spiritual practices in their daily lifestyle. people can lead a peaceful life even though they are having a hectic life. Once the people realize the value of the spiritual world, then the crimes wars, and fighting will stop. Eventually, it will increase humanity, kindness in society. Overall, spiritual education is also encouraged as other news. I thank you for the opportunity provided to express my views. Again, these are my personal views, on the contrary, I will support any decision taken by the newspaper management. Regards Naidu
To whom it may concern,

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vision in life.

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to reading more about Technology, Fashion, Sports, and Film news. In my perspective,
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education
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and future generations adopt
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practices in their daily lifestyle.
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people
can lead a peaceful life
even though
they are having a hectic life. Once the
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people
realize the value of the
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world, then the crimes wars, and fighting will
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stop
.
Eventually
, it will increase humanity, kindness in society.

Overall
,
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spiritual
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education
is
also
encouraged as other news. I thank you for the opportunity provided to express my views. Again, these are my personal views,
on the contrary
, I will support any decision taken by the newspaper management.

Regards

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Naidu
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IELTS essay spiritual education benefits

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
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