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agricultural extinct fur coat preserve = safeguard conservation captivity poaching illegal rare breeds These days, to preserve the rare breeds from being extinct from human poaching, the government decide to keep them in nature reserves. However, there are no animals happy when they are in captivity. Therefore, the optimal method maybe is to fine heavily who breaks the rules. Although it is not illegal to wear a fur coat, you will risk coming under attack from animal rights activists if you wear it in public. Animal conservation has always been a concern. My hometown is one of the largest agricultural regions in Vietnam, where you can easily observe rice paddies at different periods of the year.

agricultural extinct fur coat preserve = safeguard conservation captivity poaching illegal rare breeds These days, to preserve the rare breeds from being extinct from human poaching, the government decide to keep them in nature reserves. However, there are no animals happy when they are in captivity. Therefore, the optimal method maybe is to fine heavily who breaks the rules. Although it is not illegal to wear a fur coat, you will risk coming under attack from animal rights activists if you wear it in public. Animal conservation has always been a concern. My hometown is one of the largest agricultural regions in Vietnam, where you can easily observe rice paddies at different periods of the year. ENgxB

These days, to preserve the rare breeds from being extinct from human poaching, the government decide to keep them in nature reserves. However, there are no animals happy when they are in captivity. Therefore, the optimal method maybe is to fine heavily who breaks the rules. Although it is not illegal to wear a fur coat, you will risk coming under attack from animal rights activists if you wear it in public. Animal conservation has always been a concern. My hometown is one of the largest agricultural regions in Vietnam, where you can easily observe rice paddies at different periods of the year.

These days, to preserve the rare breeds from being extinct from human poaching, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them in nature reserves. However
, there are no animals happy when they are in captivity. Therefore
, the optimal method maybe is to fine heavily
 who breaks the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
.

Although it is not illegal to wear a fur coat, you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 coming under attack from animal rights activists if you wear it in public. Animal conservation has always been a concern.

My hometown is one of the largest agricultural regions in Vietnam, where you can easily
 observe rice paddies at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 periods of the year. 