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Agree or disagree The most important characteristic of a successful leader or politician is the ability to communicate well v.1

Agree or disagree The most important characteristic of a successful leader or politician is the ability to communicate well v. 1
The number of people living in houses and apartments is increasing equally. There are some who opine that it is beneficial to live in apartments, whereas some like houses. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of both. In relation to houses, if we will live in a house, more space will be available. All the houses are big in size as compared to apartments. Take, for example, in a house we can easily find four bedrooms which is not an option in apartments. Also, in case of any family function, we do not need to book a restaurant or any other space, and in this way it also helps us in saving money. To further clarify, houses are the best place to live because of their size. However, some assume apartments are better because of their price. For example, a lot of money is required to purchase a house, but apartments can be bought by half the money spent on a house. Besides, people will not find any financial burden on them if they live in apartments. Secondly, every class of the society is able to make an investment in an apartment, and nobody feels any type of burden. As an example, in Canada, whoever is living in a house is paying too much in the form of property tax, maintenance and so on, but the owners of apartments are free from these expanses. To sum up, although houses have more space, the advantages of living in an apartment outweigh the advantages of living in a house.
The number of
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people
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living
in
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houses
and
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apartments
is increasing
equally
. There are
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some
who opine that it is beneficial to
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live
in
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apartments
, whereas
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some
like
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houses
. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of both.

In relation to
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houses
, if we will
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live
in a
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house
, more space will be available. All the
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houses
are
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big in size
as compared to
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apartments
. Take,
for example
, in a
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house
we can
easily
find four bedrooms which is not an option in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartments
.
Also
, in case of any family function, we do not need to book a restaurant or any other space, and in this way it
also
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helps
us in saving money. To
further
clarify,
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houses
are the best place to
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live
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because
of their size.

However
,
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some
assume
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apartments
are better
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because
of their price.
For example
,
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a lot of
money
is required
to
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purchase
a
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house
,
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but
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apartments
can be
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bought
by half the money spent on a
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house
.
Besides
,
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people
will not find any financial burden on them if they
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live
in
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apartments
.
Secondly
, every
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class
of the society is able to
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make
an investment in an
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apartment
, and nobody feels any type of burden. As an example, in Canada, whoever is
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living
in a
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house
is paying too much in the form of property tax, maintenance and
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so
on,
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but
the owners of
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apartments
are free from these expanses.

To sum up, although
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houses
have more space, the advantages of
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living
in an
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apartment
outweigh the advantages of
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living
in a
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house
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Agree or disagree The most important characteristic of a successful leader or politician is the ability to communicate well v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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