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agree or disagree. playing games are fun only when you win.

agree or disagree. playing games are fun only when you win. RNVaP

There are numerous games in the world. Some you play by yourself, some with others. It can be at home, online or outdoors. Sometimes you win, other times you loss. As every game has its own purpose, I disagree that playing a game is fun only when you win. Games shall bring us joy. Playing games just for winning can cause us stress instead of happiness. When I play a game with my friends, I am enjoying not just the game itself, but also the company. We are socializing, talking, sharing memories and having good time. It is also a good opportunity to meet new people. Furthermore, we can learn much while playing a game. Kids, for example, are learning thing on a daily basis. Games can be a great educational tool. Thus using games for learning helps to stay focus and motivated. The positive experience contributes to the learning process, and makes it easy to remember a new subject. In other words, games give the children the ability to repeat and practice what they learned in other way than memorize it. Lastly, participation in the game is important as well. I am, for example, an average tennis played, and when in collage I participated in competitions. Even though I never won a game, I enjoyed it. It gave me possibility to learn new techniques and improve my level. All in all, I have perception that games played with sporting spirit are more essential than winning a game. You can benefit from games both physically and mentally. In addition, games can teach you new thing.

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games
 in the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 you play by yourself, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 with others. It can be at home, online or outdoors. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 you win, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 times you Did you mean "lost" (past tense of the verb 'lose')?lost
loss
. As every game has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 purpose, I disagree that playing a game is fun This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 when you win.

Games shall bring us joy. Playing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for winning can cause us This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
instead
 of happiness. When I play a game with my friends, I am enjoying not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 the game itself, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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company
. We are socializing, talking, sharing memories and having This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 time. It is also
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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meet
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new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

Furthermore
, we can learn much while playing a game. Kids, for example
, are learning thing on a daily basis. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
Games
 can be a great educational tool. Thus
 using You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 for learning This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to stay focus and motivated. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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makes
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 subject. In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 words, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 give the children the ability to repeat and practice what they learned in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 way than memorize it.

Lastly
, participation in the game is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
as well
. I am, for example
, an average tennis played, and when in collage I participated in competitions. Even though
 I never won a game, I enjoyed it. It gave me possibility to learn You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 techniques and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my level.

All in all, I have perception that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 played with sporting spirit are more essential than winning a game. You can benefit from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 both physically
 and mentally. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 can teach you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 thing. 