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Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life.

Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life. Lrq06
The automobile is one of the greatest inventions the human has invented in the last century. Some people may support that they have facilitated life in different ways. For example, people rely on their cars as a medium of transportation, and thus they make short commuting time. However, the automobiles also have a negative effect on our society, and the impacts can be seen more than ever before. To begin with, the massive production of cars has greatly increased the level of pollution in our planet. As a result, individuals are having more frequent health problems. The respiratory diseases. . .
The automobile is one of the greatest inventions the human has invented in the last century.
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increased the level of pollution in our planet.
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, individuals are having more frequent health problems. The respiratory diseases.
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IELTS essay Agree/ disagree. the automobile is destroying our quality of life.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
101 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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