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Advertising Field in today’s world

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The advertisement is one of the most popular professions in today’s world. People watch diversity advertisement on television, billboard and listen on radio. The father of the advertisement was David Ogilvy. In UAE, Dubai there is an advertising agency Ogilvy. Advertisement is about showcasing your product in an advanced. If advertiser want to grab public’s attention he/she has to know the ethical rules. People want to see unique product.
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today
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People
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watch
diversity advertisement on television, billboard and listen on radio.

The father of the advertisement was David Ogilvy.
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In UAE
, Dubai there is an advertising agency Ogilvy.

Advertisement is about showcasing your product in
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an advanced
.
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If
advertiser want to grab public’s attention he/she
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has to
know the ethical
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rules
.
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People
want to
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see
unique product.
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IELTS essay Advertising Field in today’s world

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
69 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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