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Advertising encourage consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. Is it true or not

Advertising encourage consumers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality. Is it true or not Rw3GV

Well nowadays most of the people prefer online shopping. Because of what with the help of advertising they can easily buying and selling. And in this way they encourage the consumers to buy in quantities rather then promoting quality. So that is true and i will discuss some points in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with in these days people can like online shopping because of what with the help of advertising they can easily seen more thing related to the latest trend. As wall as they buy on online services. They received more discounts offer and savings more money

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Because
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help
 of advertising they can easily
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buying
 and selling. And in this way they encourage the consumers to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 in quantities rather
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 promoting quality. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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that is
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some
 points in upcoming paragraphs. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
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