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Advertisements are getting more common. Some people do not pay attention to it while others think that adverts are important for businesses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advertisements are getting more common. Some people do not pay attention to it while others think that adverts are important for businesses. 56ErN
There is a contradictory trend in terms of the significance of lots of advertisements. While I agree with those who consider it as an important factor in a business, others believe that the prevalence of advertising made it not attention-grabbing anymore. On the one hand, advertisements have become an usual part of everyday life. And the mass amount of them can bother viewers. Take adverts in the Internet, for example. Because of watching the advert many times, most of net users prefer to simply skip it. Moreover, people tend to foreseen the main theme of advertisements. As the consequence of watching adverts on each step, people, in front of TV, know what they are about just in the beginning, so they prefer to not watch it until the end and turn to another chanel. On the other hand, I support that advertising products plays a crucial role in financial sphere. Because it is the best way to inform public about new products. As an example lots of delivery services, that commenced their advertisements during quarantine period, can be noted. Secondly, advertisements remind people of companies' goods. Coca-Cola there can be an obvious example. In order to prevent people from forgetting about their product the company spends billions of dollars in each year for advertising in spite of it is one of the largest companies. To sum up, despite some part of the public lose their interest to advertisements, it is always better for companies to make known their products with the help of adverts.
There is a contradictory trend in terms of the significance of lots of
advertisements
. While I
agree
with those who consider it as an
important
factor in a business, others believe that the prevalence of advertising made it not attention-grabbing anymore. On the one hand,
advertisements
have become
an
usual part of everyday life. And the mass amount of them can bother viewers. Take adverts
in the Internet
,
for example
.
Because
of watching the advert
many
times, most of net users prefer to
simply
skip it.
Moreover
,
people
tend
to foreseen
the main theme of
advertisements
. As the consequence of watching adverts on each step,
people
, in front of TV, know what they are about
just
in the beginning,
so
they prefer to not
watch
it until the
end
and turn to another
chanel
.
On the other hand
, I support that advertising
products
plays a crucial role in financial sphere.
Because
it is the best way to inform public about new
products
. As an example lots of delivery services, that commenced their
advertisements
during quarantine period, can
be noted
.
Secondly
,
advertisements
remind
people
of
companies
'
goods
. Coca-Cola there can be an obvious example. In order to
prevent
people
from forgetting about their
product
the
company
spends billions of dollars in each year for advertising
in spite of
it is one of the largest
companies
. To sum up, despite
some
part of the public lose their interest to
advertisements
, it is always better for
companies
to
make
known their
products
with the
help
of adverts.
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IELTS essay Advertisements are getting more common. Some people do not pay attention to it while others think that adverts are important for businesses.

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