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Advertisement are becoming more and more common in everyday life

Advertisement are becoming more and more common in everyday life 7JLGY
For the time being advertisement continuing to become widespread in everywhere. It comes without saying that, there are several benefits in every fields of advertisement and this following essay i will tell them. By the day advertisement are developing nearly in all part of the world. It is often said that advertisement is an indispensable for the most of recently established companies to give an information about their product quality. In addtion, there is no denying how fundamental is the role of advertisement for companies to increase demand for their prodacts. Futhemore, it is clear that advertisements can provide several unemployeds with a well-paid and rewarding job. Secondly, in more details some kind of advertisement can be addict people's attention and sales rate of the advertisement product will be increased. Advertising can encourage companies to complete and provide new product. Advertising is an increadibly effective and powerful way to spread the word about important issues, such as diavets monitor, tobaco and alcohol risks, and other heath redated concern. Finally, there is a huge impact of advertising for every nation to flourish in economy. I do appreciate other might think differently claiming that it is not an appropriate way to advertise products, as if the product quality enough, it will be high-demanded in every period. But i still firmly believe that advertisement has huge influence in every field.
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continuing to become widespread in everywhere. It
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and this following essay
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By the day
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are developing
nearly
in all part of the world. It is
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often
said that
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is an indispensable for the most of recently established
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companies
to give an information about their
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product
quality. In
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, there is no denying how fundamental is the role of
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for
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companies
to increase demand for their
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prodacts
.
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, it is
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that
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can provide several
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can be addict
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will
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. Advertising can encourage
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increadibly
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redated
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Finally
, there is a huge impact of advertising for every nation to flourish in economy.

I do appreciate other might
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differently
claiming that it is not an appropriate way to advertise
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products
, as if the
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quality
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, it will be high-demanded in every period.
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still
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has huge influence in every field.
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IELTS essay Advertisement are becoming more and more common in everyday life

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
227 words
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