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Advantages and disadvantages using internet in the modern era

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In this modern era, the Internet is revolutionizing every aspect of life. Everyone gets all information with the help of this technology and by getting knowledge from it. Like the two sides of a knife, a knife has advantages and disadvantages. The internet has many advantages. Nowadays, everyone has the internet on their cellphones, so they can easily access all kinds of knowledge and information from Google. For example, someone who wants to find flight tickets and he doesn't know how to book, he can use the application available to Google and search for tickets easily. In addition, the Internet is a good facility for everyone because today most people prefer to use social media rather than watching television or reading newspapers. Therefore, most of all the news spread through social websites because of the Internet. For case, recently the world was attacked by an outbreak of covid19. So, this type of news spread like wildfire on the internet and everyone gained this knowledge easily and very quickly. On the other side of the internet, it has several negative factors as well. Like, we can search anything on the Internet. So, it has bad aspects for children. For precedent, children can easily access several pornographic websites through their mobile phones. Apart from that, there are other things that help crime too. For example, many criminals use the internet system to hack credit or debit cards and steal them without the knowledge of their owners. In Conclusion, it can be concluded that, it is a very broad technology throughout the world. This has more positive than negative factors, but if we use it for good and wise purposes, not for crime, we will feel the benefits.
In this modern era, the Internet is revolutionizing every aspect of life.
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Everyone
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gets
all information with the
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help
of this technology and by getting
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knowledge
from it. Like the two sides of a knife, a knife has advantages and disadvantages.

The internet has
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many
advantages. Nowadays,
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everyone
has the internet on their cellphones,
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so
they can
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easily
access all kinds of
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knowledge
and information from Google.
For example
, someone who wants to find flight
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tickets and
he doesn't know how to book, he can
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use
the application available to Google and search for tickets
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easily
.
In addition
, the Internet is a
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good
facility for
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everyone
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because
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today
most
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people
prefer to
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use
social media
rather
than watching television or reading newspapers.
Therefore
, most of all the news spread through social websites
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because
of the Internet. For case, recently the world
was attacked
by an outbreak of
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covid19
.
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So
, this type of news spread like wildfire on the internet and
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everyone
gained this
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knowledge
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easily
and
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very
quickly
.

On the other side of the internet, it has several
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negative
factors
as well
. Like, we can search anything on the Internet.
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So
, it has
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bad
aspects for children. For precedent, children can
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easily
access several pornographic websites through their mobile phones. Apart from that, there are other things that
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help
crime too.
For example
,
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many
criminals
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use
the internet system to hack credit or debit cards and steal them without the
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knowledge
of their owners.

In Conclusion
, it can
be concluded
that, it is a
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very
broad technology throughout the world. This has more
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positive
than
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negative
factors,
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but
if we
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use
it for
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good
and wise purposes, not for crime, we will feel the benefits.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages using internet in the modern era

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
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