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advantages and disadvantages of weekend

advantages and disadvantages of weekend KWaYk
For me the best thing about the weekend is that I have two days just for myself and my family. Another good thing is that my husband is at home too, So we can spend time toghether. above all xe can have a trip to my hometown ti visit my family or camping in nature. However, there are some things I don. t like about the weekend. First of all, when we came back to Tehran we encounter with traffic. Secondly, Sutarday morning I have to clean home coplatly, although t"v cleaned it before. because we have many dirty clith from the trip. but in generally I love the weekend. In my point of view it is family day.
For me the best thing about the weekend is that I have two days
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for myself and my family. Another
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good
thing is that my husband is at home too,
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we can spend time
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toghether
.
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above
all
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xe
can have a trip to my hometown ti visit my family or camping in nature.
However
, there are
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things I don.
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t
like about the weekend.
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First of all
, when we came back to Tehran we encounter with traffic.
Secondly
,
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Sutarday
morning I
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have to
clean home
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coplatly
, although t
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v cleaned it
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before
.
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because
we have
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many
dirty
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clith
from the trip.
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but
in
generally
I
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the weekend. In my point of view it is family day.

IELTS essay advantages and disadvantages of weekend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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