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Write about the impacts of increase in population

Write about the impacts of increase in population YLYBm
Increase in the popul at POR leads to various offects fr both in the environment and Peoples Po a population The population had beefeade ly doveloped in the past two centuries due to the Pockenze en food suppilles and developed health care facilit Per. There are many factors which contribute to the incorazo in the popul at Pon of a Particular area For Enstang Birth rate, death rate and Emmegration etc. . . . The easy way to study about the population of a particul area es by the Pgoamed or number Pyramid of number is the graphical particular ared by denoting the number of boys and girls with their respective age group.
Increase in the
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popul
at POR leads to various
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offects
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fr
both in the environment and Peoples Po a population

The population had
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beefeade
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ly


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doveloped
in the past two centuries due to the
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Pockenze
en food
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suppilles
and developed

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health
care
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facilit
Per.

There are
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many
factors which contribute to the
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incorazo


in the
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popul
at
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Pon
of a

Particular area

For
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Enstang


Birth rate, death rate and
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Emmegration
etc.
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.
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.
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.
The easy way to study
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about


the population of a
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particul
area
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es
by the
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Pgoamed
or number Pyramid of

number is the graphical

particular
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ared
by denoting the number of boys and

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girls
with their respective age group.
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IELTS essay Write about the impacts of increase in population

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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