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advantages and disadvantages of sucralose consumption in human's diet.

advantages and disadvantages of sucralose consumption in human's diet. 3a7WN
The text discusses some disadvantages of using sucralose and by providing some explanations, explains why it believes replacing sugar with sucralose may cause some problems. In contrast, the professor goes against all the stated claims by the author and explains that they are not correct. First, the author claims that as a research, consumption of sucralose in rats resulted in shrinking of their thymus and it shows that this product can lead to some similar diseases in the humans as well. On the other hand, the professor refutes this claim and states that this research showed no sign of the disease in low level consumption of sucralose. He also adds that the consumption of sucralose for causing disease in humans should be in amount of two thousand packets each day and for a month. In this way, he explains why sucralose in regular diet of humans does not create any disease. Second, the text states that sucralose is based on some chemical components which can be stored in tissues of the body and have some poisoning effects. However, the professor rejects this claim and mentions that although sucralose can be stored in fat tissues, it will not create any toxic effect until reaches some dangerous level. He also states that the digestion and absorption of this product are hard for the human's body, and it does not accumulate in their body. Third, the author mentions that consumption of this sweetener encourage people to consume more sweet products which is not good for their health and keeping their body in shape. In contrast, the professor casts doubt on this point and explains that most of the sweeteners break down when they expose to the heat, and this is while sucralose is completely unique and does not break during the cooking process. We can also hear from him that this characteristic of sucralose enables it to be a good sugar re-placer in baked products like cookies which people may tend more to eat them. In this way, he explains why sucralose can help people to keep their diet and stay healthy.
The text discusses
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some
disadvantages of using
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sucralose
and by providing
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some
explanations,
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explains
why it believes replacing sugar with
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sucralose
may cause
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some
problems.
In contrast
, the
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professor
goes against all the stated
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claims
by the author and
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explains
that they are not correct.

First
, the author
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claims
that as a research,
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consumption
of
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sucralose
in rats resulted in shrinking of their thymus and it
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shows
that this
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product
can lead to
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some
similar diseases in the humans
as well
.
On the other hand
, the
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professor
refutes this
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claim
and states that this research
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showed
no
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sign
of the disease in low level
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consumption
of
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sucralose
. He
also
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adds
that the
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consumption
of
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sucralose
for causing disease in humans should be in amount of two thousand packets each day and for a month. In this way, he
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explains
why
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sucralose
in regular diet of humans does not create any disease.

Second, the text states that
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sucralose
is based
on
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some
chemical components which can
be stored
in tissues of the body and have
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some
poisoning effects.
However
, the
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professor
rejects this
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claim
and mentions that although
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sucralose
can
be stored
in
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fat
tissues, it will not create any toxic effect until reaches
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some
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dangerous
level. He
also
states that the digestion and absorption of this
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product
are
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hard
for the human's body, and it does not accumulate in their body.

Third, the author mentions that
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consumption
of this sweetener encourage
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people
to consume more sweet
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products
which is not
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good
for their health and keeping their body in shape.
In contrast
, the
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professor
casts doubt on this point and
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explains
that most of the sweeteners break down when they expose to the heat, and this is while
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sucralose
is completely unique and does not break during the cooking process. We can
also
hear from him that this characteristic of
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sucralose
enables it to be a
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good
sugar re-placer in baked
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products
like cookies which
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people
may tend more to eat them. In this way, he
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explains
why
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sucralose
can
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help
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people
to
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keep
their diet and stay healthy.
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IELTS essay advantages and disadvantages of sucralose consumption in human's diet.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
5.5
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