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ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ADVERTISING

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In the present times, promoting one’s business gives focus to the unique new products. There are several positives of advertising such as more income and opportunities that improves the items that businesses sell. However, some companies and business owners turn to fallacy and false information just for an increase in popularity and income. I believe that despite the wrong intentions of some people, advertising is still a great way to show case a product. Companies and business owners turn to advertising to increase their products’ demand and improve the perception of the majority of its target consumers. It helps with the overall development of the business, because it paves a way for feedback and further betterment of the product. Additionally, it provides information to the consumers that are interested helping them make better decision before purchasing. Samsung, for instance, advertises its new phones through explaining its unique features, which increase its popularity in the market. Therefore, making advertising products as brand new a positive development. On the other hand, numerous companies overly exaggerate the factors that makes their product worth buying. Due to wrong intentions and greedy means, some advertisement aren’t trustable resulting to the circulation of false information and disappointment of consumers. An example of it is one size clothing, which claims that it can fit any body type when in reality it only fits certain types of it. This then results to negative view not only to the product, but also, to the company that sold it as well resulting to a negative development. It is common to see products gaining popularity and attention, because it is considered as new. Companies use advertising in a variety of ways and intentions, which results to either a positive or negative development. Although, I believe that for all the reasons I stated, promoting a product as something unique and never seen yet results to positive development, because it helps consumers make wise decision while at the same time increase the demand of the product.
In the present times, promoting one’s
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business
gives focus to the unique
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new
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products
. There are several
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positives
of advertising such as more income and opportunities that
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improves
the items that
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businesses
sell.
However
,
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some
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companies
and
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business
owners turn to fallacy and false information
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just
for an
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increase
in popularity and income. I believe that despite the
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wrong
intentions of
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some
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people
, advertising is
still
a great way to
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show
case a product.

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Companies
and
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business
owners turn to advertising to
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increase
their
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products’
demand and
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improve
the perception of the majority of its target
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consumers
. It
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helps
with the
overall
development of the
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business
,
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because
it paves a way for feedback and
further
betterment of the
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product
.
Additionally
, it provides information to the
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consumers
that
are interested
helping them
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make
better decision
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before
purchasing. Samsung,
for instance
, advertises its
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new
phones through explaining its unique features, which
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increase
its popularity in the market.
Therefore
, making advertising
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products
as brand
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new
a
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positive
development.

On the other hand
, numerous
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companies
overly
exaggerate the factors that
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makes
their
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product
worth buying. Due to
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wrong
intentions and greedy means,
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some
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advertisement
aren’t trustable resulting to the circulation of false information and disappointment of
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consumers
. An example of it is one size clothing, which claims that it can fit
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any body
type when in reality it
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only
fits certain types of it. This then results to
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negative
view not
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only
to the
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product
,
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but
also
, to the
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company
that sold it
as well
resulting to a
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negative
development.

It is common to
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see
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products
gaining popularity and attention,
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because
it
is considered
as
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new
.
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Companies
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use
advertising in a variety of ways and intentions, which results to either a
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positive
or
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negative
development. Although, I believe that for all the reasons I stated, promoting a
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product
as something unique and never
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seen
yet
results to
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positive
development,
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because
it
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helps
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consumers
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make
wise decision while at the same time
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increase
the demand of the
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product
.
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IELTS essay ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF ADVERTISING

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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