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Pros and cons of immigration

Pros and cons of immigration D2y6A
As a matter of the fact, a considerable number of people leave their own countries for different reasons every year in particular the ones who live in either Third-World or underdeveloped countries. There is no denying that immigration can bring several advantages and disadvantages for immigrants as well as the host countries. This essay will make an effort to investigate the pros and cons of each one. One of the most significant benefits of immigration is that immigrants can hope for a bright future ahead of their lives. Without a doubt, those who leave their own countries in order to make a better lifestyle are not satisfied with something in their countries in which they had been living for a long time. For instance, as the consequence of financial problems in Iran, a great number of highly educated people immigrate to developed countries in order to find suitable jobs with all rights they deserve. That is a major reason behind a lot of brain drain in Iran. I would like to emphasize on the fact that it also has a numerous number of merits for the host countries. They hired low-expectation specialists with minimum salaries to fill vacancies in unpopular jobs. On the other hand, immigration does not always come with benefits. After a while, some immigrates notice the host country is not as perfect as it may seem. They face a lot of obstacles such as cultural differences, housing and racial prejudice. It is also worth mentation that immigration can increase the crime rate in the host countries dramatically. The main reason behind this is the fact that illegal immigrants are not allowed to work. Therefore, they commit different kinds of crimes to make a living. From my point of view, immigration along with its merits can have plenty of drawbacks as well. It would be determined by immigrant’s conditions. Consequently, I suppose, one of the most effective ideas is that those who want to immigrate to another country should write down all of the merits and demerits of their decision. Afterwards, they weigh up their options carefully. Finally, they can make a choice whether it is a wise choice or not. To conclude, immigration can be both excellent and terrible. It totally depends on the person who intends to immigrate as well as the circumstances of the destination country and a little luck. To the best of my knowledge, the very first step to immigrate is to get accurate information either from qualified people or official websites.
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. There is no denying that
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immigration
can bring several advantages and disadvantages for
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immigrants
as well
as the
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host
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countries
. This essay will
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an effort to investigate the pros and cons of each one.

One of the most significant benefits of
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immigration
is that
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immigrants
can hope for a bright future ahead of their
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lives
. Without a doubt, those
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who
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leave
their
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countries
in order to
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a better lifestyle are not satisfied with something in their
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countries
in which they had been living for a long time.
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, as the consequence of financial problems in Iran, a great number of
highly
educated
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people
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to developed
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countries
in order to find suitable jobs with all rights they deserve.
That is
a major reason behind
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a lot of
brain drain in Iran. I would like to emphasize on the fact that it
also
has a numerous number of merits for the
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host
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countries
. They hired low-expectation specialists with minimum salaries to fill vacancies in unpopular jobs.

On the other hand
,
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immigration
does not always
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come
with benefits. After a while,
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some
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immigrates
notice the
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host
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country
is not as perfect as it may seem. They face
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a lot of
obstacles such as cultural differences, housing and racial prejudice. It is
also
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that
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immigration
can increase the crime rate in the
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host
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countries
dramatically
. The main reason behind this is the fact that illegal
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immigrants
are not
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allowed
to work.
Therefore
, they commit
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different
kinds of crimes to
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make
a living.

From my point of view,
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immigration
along with its merits can have
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plenty
of drawbacks
as well
. It would
be determined
by
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immigrant’s
conditions.
Consequently
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ideas
is that those
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who
want to
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immigrate
to another
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country
should write down
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all of the
merits and demerits of their decision. Afterwards, they weigh up their options
carefully
.
Finally
, they can
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a choice whether it is a wise choice or not.

To conclude
,
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immigration
can be both excellent and terrible. It
totally
depends on the person
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who
intends to
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immigrate
as well
as the circumstances of the destination
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country
and a
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little
luck. To the best of my knowledge, the
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very
first
step to
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immigrate
is to
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get
accurate information either from qualified
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people
or official websites.
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IELTS essay Pros and cons of immigration

Essay
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5 paragraphs
419 words
6.5
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