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The starting of the 2000s have a big impact on society. With the rising of Technology, it has everything for every purpose, like “how to bake a cake? ” or “how to have a healthy lifestyle? ”, some people even utilize it to learn several languages or use it as a companion on their daily exercises in order not to feel lonely. But to make technology good for your mental health is not effortless work. So that making technology useful is easy but there are some cons hidden in that usefulness also. Exemplifying teenagers, a vast number of them chose entertainment. Fascinating teens with technology is a great pill to cure pessimism and a way of allowing them to make more friends through social media, a vast majority of parents have a strong agreement with this one. Technology technically prevented teenagers from society's vice, helping their communities to become better than ever before. On the other hand, there is also a “not so small” number of detriments affecting a teen’s life. In the first stage, Overusing technology can make teens easily lose their self-control as well as affecting their mental health, causing them to be “socially disconnected“ or “typical introvert”. Moving on to the second stage where the teen’s behavior starting to have aggressive behavior exemplifying Violence acts, aggressively replying to parents. Teens playing violent video games can also have a special mental health problem, they tend to think that they have powers from the protagonist in the game they played and then demonstrated them publicly causing harm to people nearby. Overall, I think that using technology has more cons than pros since the 2000s generation still has the thought of a child. If we are responsible enough to use technology safely and use it to our advantage.
The starting of the 2000s have a
big
impact on society. With the rising of
Technology
, it has everything for every purpose, like “how to bake a cake? ” or “how to have a healthy lifestyle? ”,
some
people
even utilize it to learn several languages or
use
it as a companion on their daily exercises in order not to feel lonely.
But
to
make
technology
good
for your mental health is not effortless work.
So
that making
technology
useful is easy
but
there are
some
cons hidden in that usefulness
also
.

Exemplifying
teenagers
, a vast number of them chose entertainment. Fascinating
teens
with
technology
is a great pill to cure pessimism and a way of allowing them to
make
more friends through social media, a vast majority of parents have a strong agreement with this one.

Technology
technically
prevented
teenagers
from society's vice, helping their communities to become better than ever
before
.

On the other hand
, there is
also
a “not
so
small
” number of detriments affecting a
teen’s
life. In the
first
stage, Overusing
technology
can
make
teens
easily
lose their self-control
as well
as affecting their mental health, causing them to be “
socially
disconnected“ or “typical introvert”.

Moving on to the second stage where the
teen’s
behavior starting to have aggressive behavior exemplifying Violence acts,
aggressively
replying to parents.
Teens
playing violent video games can
also
have a special mental health problem, they tend to
think
that they have powers from the protagonist in the game they played and then demonstrated them
publicly
causing harm to
people
nearby.

Overall
, I
think
that using
technology
has more cons than pros since the 2000s generation
still
has the
thought
of a child. If we are responsible
enough
to
use
technology
safely
and
use
it to our advantage.
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IELTS essay advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
298 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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