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Describe a skill that you leaned from older people? What the skill is? Who you learned it from? How you learned it? And how you feel about it?

Describe a skill that you leaned from older people? What the skill is? Who you learned it from? How you learned it? And how you feel about it? BW5Ep
Muslim people learn so many things from their older people because they have so much knowledge and the share they share their knowledge to their off grand childs now I talk powder thing that I learn from from my grandfather I remember when I was a child that time he he teach me mate he is very good in maths and here is my first teacher and he helped me to develop my interest in studies irregular spend so many hours on me so that I get like knowledge about maths and their because of that I am good in maths and member when I first time to math I was not understand but after that with the regular practice I become good in maths after I feel very happy and then I was promoted to new class because I got first position in the class due to that I feel very happy and I want to to make him proud.
Muslim
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people
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things from their older
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people
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they have
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so
much knowledge and the share they share their knowledge to their off grand childs
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now
I talk powder thing that I learn
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from from
my grandfather I remember when I was a child that time
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he he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "teaches", "taught".
teach
me mate he is
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very
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good
in
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maths
and here is my
first
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teacher and
he
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helped
me to develop my interest in studies irregular spend
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so
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many
hours on me
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so
that I
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get
like knowledge about
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maths
and their
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because
of that I am
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good
in
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maths
and member when I
first
time to
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math
I was not
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understand
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but
after that with the regular practice I become
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good
in
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maths
after I feel
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very
happy and then I
was promoted
to new
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class
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because
I
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got
first
position in the
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class
due to that I feel
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very
happy and I want
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to to
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make
him proud.

IELTS essay Describe a skill that you leaned from older people? What the skill is? Who you learned it from? How you learned it? And how you feel about it?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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