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Advantages and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study abroad

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Nowadays, many people tend to leave their country to live or study abroad. Research conducted by Harvard University in 2019 indicated that 45% of the student population in the United States have the intention to pursue an international experience, a trend expected to increase in the following years. Despite several reasons people gravitate toward going abroad, in this essay, I will describe in detail some pros and cons of doing so. One of the main advantages of living or studying abroad is the opportunity to gain a clearer sense of the self. Getting out of the comfort zone enables people to explore alternative scenarios, to identify and embrace what they enjoy or dislike. But most importantly, to be amazed by their capabilities. Besides, many who have gone abroad appear to develop superior problem-solving skills as they learn to think out of the box. When surrounded by different perspectives, political and cultural frameworks, people gather more information and seek more alternatives to solve a problem. There is no denying that moving abroad implies some disadvantages too, such as the language barrier and the cultural-distance, many describe how this cultural misunderstanding can lead people to feel like an outsider and helpless. Furthermore, going abroad can be expensive for some due to currency differences. Unfortunately, some will have to duplicate their efforts to save enough money to pay their bill since their currency is undervalued. To sum up, like all situations in life, going abroad has several advantages and disadvantages, and it is up to people to decide whether to have a go or not. In my opinion, it seems to bring to the table more pros than cons, and that’s the reason why a vaster number of people are doing it every day. In my experience, it is all about attitude; people can overcome cultural-distance by being open-minded and willing to adapt. Finally, further financial aid and programs are available compared to the past, such as loans, scholarships, government initiatives like Erasmus, etc.
Nowadays,
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many
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tend to
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leave
their country to
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live
or study
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abroad
. Research conducted by Harvard University in 2019 indicated that 45% of the student population in the United States have the intention to pursue an international experience, a trend
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expected
to increase in the following years. Despite several reasons
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people
gravitate toward going
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abroad
, in this essay, I will
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describe
in detail
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some
pros and cons of doing
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so
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One of the main advantages of living or studying
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abroad
is the opportunity to gain a clearer sense of the self. Getting out of the comfort zone enables
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people
to explore alternative scenarios, to identify and embrace what they enjoy or dislike.
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But
most
importantly
, to
be amazed
by their capabilities.
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,
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many
who have gone
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abroad
appear to develop superior problem-solving
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skills
as they learn to
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think
out of the box. When surrounded by
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different
perspectives, political and cultural frameworks,
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people
gather more information and seek more alternatives to solve a problem.

There is no denying that moving
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abroad
implies
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some
disadvantages too, such as the language barrier and the cultural-distance,
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many
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describe
how this cultural misunderstanding can lead
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people
to feel like an outsider and helpless.
Furthermore
, going
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abroad
can be expensive for
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some
due to currency differences. Unfortunately,
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some
will
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have to
duplicate their efforts to save
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enough
money to pay their bill since their currency
is undervalued
.

To sum up, like all situations in life, going
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abroad
has several advantages and disadvantages, and it is up to
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people
to decide whether to have a go or not. In my opinion, it seems to bring to the table more pros than cons, and that’s the reason why a vaster number of
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people
are doing it every day. In my experience, it is all about attitude;
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people
can overcome cultural-distance by being open-minded and willing to adapt.
Finally
,
further
financial aid and programs are available compared to the past, such as loans, scholarships,
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government
initiatives like Erasmus, etc.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study abroad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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