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advances in technology mean that many people today work from work

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With technology industry developping, our life is getting easier and easier. That is why, Most of the people prefer to work, without going out. Although there are certain drawbaks, but benefits more that off disadvantages On the one hand, There are some negative site to work at home. So they isolated form society. In addition to this, if many workers work from their home, they will not heve enough competition. Moreover, many people opinion that, increasing number of private cars for the work will causes pollution problem and traffic jam.
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benefits more that off disadvantages

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opinion that, increasing number of private cars for the
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will causes pollution problem and traffic jam.
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IELTS essay advances in technology mean that many people today work from work

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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