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Advance mode of transport is available still some people belive that bycycle is ggod to commute one place to another do you agree or disagree

Advance mode of transport is available still some people belive that bycycle is ggod to commute one place to another eA1PV
In this rat race era, where mode of transport is a became modern fast and easily available in every town or city whereas a section of society conceive that it is healthy to use bicycles for travelling however I strongly believe that bicycles are not quite effective at all conditions As my view is supported with reasons and examples in this inclined paragraph To Commence with, living in this most polluted century using bicycles will always promote a green energy which is immaculate in every term Bhat going to the fact that now cars trains and buses are becoming electric at gradual manner although governments Are also moulding their citizens to words electricity for instance in 2008 majority of developing and developed nations signed the Paris agreement 2008 in which every country should become carbon neutral till 2050 and in their clauses they mentioned about transport industry which cause most of the pollution and by 2040 every nation should make their cars electric so that the things could be controlled Nevertheless we cannot ignore the fact that by using bicycles on a daily basis for a short and regular work will make a person healthy and wise by using them everyone can become quick and creative however bicycles cannot be used for long distances and it’s the only drawback of them to cite an example a group of friends one always use car for every task whereas another one always use bicycle and anyone can easily spot the difference between their physical health perhaps using motor transport is quick and fast but bicycles will always keep you healthy In conclusion both the transports are best in their own ways if they care about pollution and environment because making environment excuse it is our responsibility although Making our environment clean is our national duty
In this rat race era, where mode of
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transport
is a became modern
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fast
and
easily
available in every town or city whereas a section of society conceive that it is healthy to
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use
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bicycles
for travelling
however
I
strongly
believe that
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bicycles
are not quite effective at all conditions As my view
is supported
with reasons and examples in this inclined paragraph

To Commence with, living in this most polluted century using
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bicycles
will always promote a green energy which is immaculate in every term
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Bhat
going to the fact that
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now
cars trains and buses are becoming electric at gradual manner although
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governments
Are
also
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moulding
their citizens to words electricity
for instance
in 2008 majority of developing and developed nations signed the Paris agreement 2008 in which every country should become carbon neutral till 2050 and in their clauses they mentioned about
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transport
industry which cause most of the pollution and by 2040 every nation should
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make
their cars electric
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so
that the things could
be controlled


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Nevertheless
we cannot
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ignore
the fact that by using
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bicycles
on a daily basis for a short and regular work will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a person healthy and wise by using them everyone can become quick and creative
however
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bicycles
cannot be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for long distances and it’s the
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only
drawback of them to cite an example a group of friends one always
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use
car for every task whereas another one always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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bicycle
and anyone can
easily
spot the difference between their physical health perhaps using motor
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transport
is quick and
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fast
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but
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bicycles
will always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
you healthy

In conclusion
both the
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transports
are best in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
ways if they care about pollution and environment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
making environment excuse it is our responsibility although Making our environment clean is our national duty
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IELTS essay Advance mode of transport is available still some people belive that bycycle is ggod to commute one place to another

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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