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Adolescence is the phase of transition between childhood and adulthood. It involves the physical and psychological growth and development of a person during the puberty period and is usually marked by the teenage years. The ages between 10 to 24 are generally said to be adolescence period. Some people think that teenage years are the best years while others think that they are the hardest

Adolescence is the phase of transition between childhood and adulthood. It involves the physical and psychological growth and development of a person during the puberty period and is usually marked by the teenage years. The ages between 10 to 24 are generally said to be adolescence period. Some people think that teenage years are the best years while others think that they are the hardest VlYB3

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