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Acquaintance and friends, how are they different? Write a 250 words essay to compare and contrast the traits of these two relationships.

Acquaintance and friends, how are they different? Write a 250 words essay to compare and contrast the traits of these two relationships. 73xWy
Acquaintance is someone who is known but not a close friend; whereas, friend is a person with whom you share a strong bond. Therefore, these two relationships have some differences in understanding and connection. First, in terms of understanding, it is about the amount of information that we know about each other. The acquaintance relationship only has slightly understanding each other such as the names and where they live. Acquaintance is often the people we see at work or at school, but never bother to see outside of those circumstances. In constrast, a friendship has deeper understanding such as the life or details about each other. Friends are people that we close with and we can share our story in daily life to. They can be offline friendships which begin at school, work, etc; or online friendship on social media. Second, the connection of these two relationships is also another different trait. It bases on how often they interact or communicate with each other. With the acquaintance relationship, people do not connect too often, they may have some long conversations but they are usually not the kind of conversation that dig down about the personal information of each other. On the contrary, with friendships, people can freely share daily information and often interact with each other; not only directly but also through text or social networks. In conlusion, acquaintance and friends relationships have two main different traits, which are the understanding and connection.
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Acquaintance
is someone who
is known
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but
not a close
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friend
; whereas,
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friend
is a person with whom you share a strong bond.
Therefore
, these two
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relationships
have
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some
differences in
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understanding
and connection.

First
, in terms of
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understanding
, it is about the amount of information that we know about each
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other
. The
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acquaintance
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relationship
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only
has
slightly
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understanding
each
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other
such as the names and where they
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live
.
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Acquaintance
is
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often
the
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people
we
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see
at work or at school,
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but
never bother to
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see
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outside of
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constrast
, a
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friendship
has deeper
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understanding
such as the life or
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details
about each
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other
.
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Friends
are
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people
that we close
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with and
we can share our story in daily life to. They can be offline
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friendships
which
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begin
at school, work, etc; or online
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friendship
on social media.

Second, the connection of these two
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relationships
is
also
another
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trait. It bases on how
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often
they interact or communicate with each
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other
. With the
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acquaintance
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relationship
,
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people
do not connect too
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often
, they may have
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some
long conversations
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but
they are
usually
not the kind of conversation that dig down about the personal information of each
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other
.
On the contrary
, with
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friendships
,
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people
can
freely
share daily information and
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often
interact with each
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other
; not
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directly
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but
also
through text or social networks.

In
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conlusion
,
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acquaintance
and
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friends
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relationships
have two main
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different
traits, which are the
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understanding
and connection.
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IELTS essay Acquaintance and friends, how are they different? Write a 250 words essay to compare and contrast the traits of these two relationships.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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