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Achieve your goals in a right way

Achieve your goals in a right way rKOlL
In my opinion all and sundry must have purpose and try for it. You need to hit the books to be successful but it doesn't mean that to live it up balance in everything is good. Always do your best and never say die Just keep believing good things are coming On the way to achieve your goals you may feel that you're in hot water ofcourse it's not easy as ABC but it's not impossible too. When you work hard so you can be successful remember that no pain, no gain.
In my opinion all and sundry
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it up balance in everything is
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Always do your best and never say
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believing
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things are coming On the way to achieve your goals you may feel that you're in hot water
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it's not easy as ABC
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it's not impossible too. When you work
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you can be successful remember that no pain, no gain.
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IELTS essay Achieve your goals in a right way

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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