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According to environmentalists in United States, burning coal in power plants contributes to develop a harmful chemical called coal ash in the ecosystem.

According to environmentalists in United States, burning coal in power plants contributes to develop a harmful chemical called coal ash in the ecosystem. Dl3A7
According to environmentalists in United States, burning coal in power plants contributes to develop a harmful chemical called coal ash in the ecosystem. Those people concerned about it, and they want a new stricter regulation for that activity by the government. However, owners from companies of coal disagree about a new rule, as long as, it would be unnecessary and from their perspective; it might have a negative impact. The listening passage support the idea about new regulation. They strongly believe that the current regulation is insufficient at some point. For example, they require companies to use liner to protect the environment that doesn’t work at all, because they only use liner in case of a new landfill or a new pond. Companies are not require to use in old ponds or landfills. The harmful chemicals from coal ask can be able to leak into ground water and contaminate drinking water. Analysts concern about recycling coal ash and they believe new rules might discourage this procedure. Those analysts pointed out, the fact that recycling coal ash represents a large portion of materials such as concrete and bricks, which reduces disposal in other ways, and it doesn’t represent environmental danger, also infer to increase cost of products made by coal ash. Companies can have no option and increase price of electricity. In the other hand, the listening passage refuse to agree with it. They believe the new regulation no longer will discourage people to use recycle coal ash products. Other danger material for example, mercury can be handle and stored despite the current regulation for a long period, it has been unsafe recycled for over 50 years, and consumers won’t be afraid to buy recycle coal ash products if strict regulations are working out. In addiction the listening explains, even though the price will naturally increase, it wouldn’t be so bad if you look at the math behind it, which is going to represent only 1% average of cost.
According to environmentalists
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in United States
, burning coal in power plants contributes to develop a harmful chemical called coal ash in the ecosystem.

Those
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people
concerned about it, and they want a
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new
stricter
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regulation
for that activity by the
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government
.
However
, owners from
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companies
of coal disagree about a
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new
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rule
, as long as, it would be unnecessary and from their perspective; it might have a
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negative
impact. The listening passage support the
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idea
about
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new
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regulation
. They
strongly
believe that the
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current
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regulation
is insufficient at
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some
point.
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, they require
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companies
to
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use
liner to protect the environment that doesn’t work at all,
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because
they
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only
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use
liner in case of a
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new
landfill or a
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new
pond.
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Companies
are not
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require
to
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use
in
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ponds or landfills. The harmful chemicals from coal ask can be able to leak into ground water and contaminate drinking water.

Analysts concern about recycling coal
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ash and
they believe
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new
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rules
might discourage this procedure. Those analysts pointed out, the fact that recycling coal ash represents a large portion of materials such as concrete and bricks, which
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reduces
disposal in other ways, and it doesn’t represent environmental
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danger
,
also
infer to increase cost of products made by coal ash.
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Companies
can have no option and increase price of electricity. In the other hand, the listening passage refuse to
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agree
with it. They believe the
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new
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regulation
no longer will discourage
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people
to
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use
recycle coal ash products. Other
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danger
material
for example
, mercury can be
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handle
and stored despite the
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current
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regulation
for a long period, it has been unsafe recycled for over 50 years, and consumers won’t be afraid to
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buy
recycle coal ash products if strict
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regulations
are working out. In addiction the listening
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explains
,
even though
the price will
naturally
increase, it wouldn’t be
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so
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bad
if you look at the math behind it, which is going to represent
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only
1% average of cost.
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IELTS essay According to environmentalists in United States, burning coal in power plants contributes to develop a harmful chemical called coal ash in the ecosystem.

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328 words
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