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Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved T

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Subject: Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved TE= $99, 426, tenor 15 months with mortgaged 20% of TE. My customer location: Lot D10, Street No. 2, Tan Do Industrial Park, Duc Hoa Ha Commune, Duc Hoa District, Long An Province. They agree to cooperate with mortgaged assets. Due to the epidemic, I could not move to Long An to check the mortgage machines. Furthermore, the client make: +The customer makes an authorization letter for their employees to take pictures of the property. + Make a video of the machine and the scene where the machine is located Please help me to accept the applicant to take pictures of assets. Proposal: Please accept the picture which takes by the customer PROPOSED BY: Nguyen Thi Vien Ly
Subject: Accepting the applicant to take
pictures
of mortgage assets.

Content:

The Dung case
was approved
TE= $99, 426, tenor 15 months with mortgaged 20% of TE.

My customer location: Lot D10, Street No. 2, Tan Do Industrial Park,
Duc
Hoa
Ha Commune,
Duc
Hoa
District, Long An Province.

They
agree
to cooperate with mortgaged assets. Due to the epidemic, I could not
move
to Long An to
check
the mortgage machines.
Furthermore
, the client
make
:

+The customer
makes
an authorization letter for their employees to take
pictures
of the property.

+
Make
a video of the machine and the scene where the machine
is located


Please
help
me to accept the applicant to take
pictures
of assets.

Proposal:
Please
accept the
picture
which takes by the customer

PROPOSED BY: Nguyen
Thi
Vien
Ly
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IELTS essay Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved T

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
133 words
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5.0
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