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Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved T

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Subject: Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved TE= $99, 426, tenor 15 months with mortgaged 20% of TE. My customer location: Lot D10, Street No. 2, Tan Do Industrial Park, Duc Hoa Ha Commune, Duc Hoa District, Long An Province. They agree to cooperate with mortgaged assets. Due to the epidemic, I could not move to Long An to check the mortgage machines. Furthermore, the client make: +The customer makes an authorization letter for their employees to take pictures of the property. + Make a video of the machine and the scene where the machine is located Please help me to accept the applicant to take pictures of assets. Proposal: Please accept the picture which takes by the customer PROPOSED BY: Nguyen Thi Vien Ly
Subject: Accepting the applicant to take
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pictures
of mortgage assets.

Content:

The Dung case
was approved
TE= $99, 426, tenor 15 months with mortgaged 20% of TE.

My customer location: Lot D10, Street No. 2, Tan Do Industrial Park,
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Duc
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Hoa
Ha Commune,
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Duc
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Hoa
District, Long An Province.

They
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agree
to cooperate with mortgaged assets. Due to the epidemic, I could not
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move
to Long An to
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check
the mortgage machines.
Furthermore
, the client
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make
:

+The customer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
an authorization letter for their employees to take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
of the property.

+
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Make
a video of the machine and the scene where the machine
is located


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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to accept the applicant to take
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
of assets.

Proposal:
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Please
accept the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
picture
which takes by the customer

PROPOSED BY: Nguyen
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Thi
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Vien
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Ly
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IELTS essay Accepting the applicant to take pictures of mortgage assets. Content: The Dung case was approved T

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
133 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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