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Accepting Bad situation or improving it

Accepting Bad situation or improving it GN3Lw
In life many people face problems most of the time they accept it and carry on and sometimes they try to change the situation so that the outcome can be nice. This topic tells us that we should not get upset over things but we should do something over it rather than cursing it. We should not cry over situation instated of that try to cope up or find happiness in it. There are times when some people might offend you for who you are but we should stand firm on what we are. Its recall one incident which occurred with me at the time of my internship. It was a pretty bad situation there were two choice one might expelled me from my job and second one was my choice, I will explain it. The problem was that there were some mistake while sending a mail to a client, I accidently entered wrong data and forwarded the mail to the client. While checking again I came to know about it. I informed it to my superior about the situation, I thought I have lost my job but to my surprise the superior praised me for my truthfulness rather than scolding me and fairing me. From this situation we come to know that we should always not accept bad situation but some time try to do something so that the situation can be changed to our favors. Not always you can succeed in your dream but rather than accepting the worst situation try hard to change it into you favor.
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they accept it and carry on and
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that the outcome can be nice. This topic
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we should do something over it
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instated of that try to cope up or find happiness in it. There are
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we should stand firm on what we are. Its recall one incident which occurred with me at the
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of my internship. It was a pretty
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there were two choice one might
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me from my job and second one was my choice, I will
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mistake while sending a mail to a client, I
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entered
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data and forwarded the mail to the client.
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, I
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I have lost my job
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to my surprise the superior praised me for my truthfulness
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From this
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to know that we should always not accept
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try to do something
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to our favors. Not always you can succeed in your dream
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rather
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it into you favor.
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IELTS essay Accepting Bad situation or improving it

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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