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Some people believe that universities should only teach one subject, while others opine that multiple subjects should be tought.

Some people believe that universities should only teach one subject, while others opine that multiple subjects should be tought. Wn1ob
It is reckoned by some that universities should only focus on teaching one subject, whereas learning plethora of subjects helps to get well settle job and secure future is opine by others. This essay will discuss the both facets along with my opinion. To begin with, numerous of reasons are associated behind choosing a range of subjects for learning. Firstly, more choices of jobs. In future, if the students study a wide range of subjects, they will get the options in their working life in order to become financially independent. Along with jobs selection, students may feel boredom by reading or studying only one subject. This being a reason they get variations in environment and update distinct kind of knowledge by grabing the information regarding different subjects. Despite of being educated by different subjects, some students find easy and productive to learn only a single subject. Once the pupil choose one subject, it helps to stay focused on particular sector and a person set a goal for the life which will directly help to reach on the pinnacle of success. What is more, opting for only one subject leads a person to high and well paid jobs as well as make them more professional and productive. To cite an example of CEO of google, Sundra Pichai whose aim was only to make career as CEO of multinational company so he focused only on commerce stream rather than multi-subjects. In conclusion, although learning multifarious subjects enhance the holistic development of a person, still i think that preference to one subject leads a person to the bright future and assists to achieve particular life goals.
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, whereas learning plethora of
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and secure future is
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by others. This essay will discuss the both facets along with my opinion. To
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begin
with, numerous of reasons
are associated
behind choosing a range of
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subjects
for learning.
Firstly
, more choices of
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jobs
.
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, if the students study a wide range of
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subjects
, they will
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get
the options in their working life in order to become
financially
independent. Along with
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jobs
selection, students may feel boredom by reading or studying
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only
one
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subject
. This being a reason they
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get
variations in environment and update distinct kind of knowledge by
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grabing
the information regarding
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.
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,
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students find easy and productive to learn
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a single
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. Once the pupil choose one
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, it
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to stay focused on particular sector and a
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person
set a goal for the life which will
directly
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help
to reach on the pinnacle of success.
What is more
, opting for
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one
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leads a
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to high and well paid
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as well
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Sundra
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to
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make
career as CEO of multinational
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company
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he focused
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on commerce stream
rather
than multi-subjects.
In conclusion
, although learning multifarious
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enhance the holistic development of a
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person
,
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that preference to one
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leads a
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to the bright future and assists to achieve particular life goals.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that universities should only teach one subject, while others opine that multiple subjects should be tought.

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