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About the climate changes to our climate which are taking place.

About the climate changes to our climate which are taking place. Q5K73
Experts in climatology and other scientists are becoming extremely concerned about the changes to our climate which are taking place. Admittedly, climate changes have occurred on our planet before. For example, there have been several ice ages or glacial periods. These climatic changes, however, were different from the modern ones in that they occurred gradually and, as far as we know, naturally. The changes currently being monitored are said to be the result not of natural causes, but of human activity. Furthermore, the rate of change is becoming alarmingly rapid. The major problem is that appears to be warming up. According to some experts, this warming process, known as global warming, is occurring at a rate unprecedented in the last 10, 000 years. The implications for the planet are very serious. Rising global temperatures could give rise to such ecological disasters as extremely high increases in the incidence of flooding and of droughts. These in turn could have a harmful effect on agriculture.
Experts in climatology and other scientists are becoming
extremely
concerned about the
changes
to our climate which are taking place.
Admittedly
, climate
changes
have occurred on our planet
before
.
For example
, there have been several ice ages or glacial periods.

These climatic
changes
,
however
, were
different
from the modern ones in that they occurred
gradually
and, as far as we know,
naturally
. The
changes
currently
being monitored
are said
to be the result not of natural causes,
but
of human activity.
Furthermore
, the rate of
change
is becoming
alarmingly
rapid.

The major problem is that appears to be warming up. According to
some
experts, this warming process, known as global warming, is occurring at a rate unprecedented in the last 10, 000 years. The implications for the planet are
very
serious. Rising global temperatures could give rise to such ecological disasters as
extremely
high increases in the incidence of flooding and of droughts. These in turn could have a harmful effect on agriculture.
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IELTS essay About the climate changes to our climate which are taking place.

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163 words
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