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about teenagers and social media

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social media is the most popular communication device last ten years. At the centre of our lifes. People are sharing what they want( for example what they eat in a day? and what they doing? etc. ) This posts which visible to everyone faciliate to adding comments for people they don't know. Most of people especially teenagers getting bully easily for this reason. Teenagers are insulted their bodies and faces. As a result they don't like themselves, don't want to go out, don't looking the mirror. That's why teenagers to be caught eating disorders. They are attempting suicide because of cyberbullies. In my opinion It is necessary to provide psychological support in schools and it should be explanied social media is fake.

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