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About my future plans and life style

About my future plans and life style e8k2x
I was always been an enthusiastic from my childhood. I prefer to do some thing elegant in life That is the only reason why i have chosen medicine as a career. I was quite fascinated about the difficulty of subject and that kept me motivated throughout my medical school journey. As now i am graduated, the next step which i am focusing to do my higher studies in uk. I love to be part of national health service in uk, i really got attached emotionally to the working subjective of the NHS.
I was always been an enthusiastic from my childhood. I prefer to do
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some thing
elegant in life
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only
reason why
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have chosen medicine as a career.
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was quite fascinated about the difficulty of subject and that
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kept
me motivated throughout my medical school journey. As
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now
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i
am graduated
, the
next
step which
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i
am focusing to do my higher studies in
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uk
. I
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love
to be part of national health service in
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uk
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really
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attached
emotionally
to the working subjective of the NHS.
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IELTS essay About my future plans and life style

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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