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About my future plans and life style

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I was always been an enthusiastic from my childhood. I prefer to do some thing elegant in life That is the only reason why i have chosen medicine as a career. I was quite fascinated about the difficulty of subject and that kept me motivated throughout my medical school journey. As now i am graduated, the next step which i am focusing to do my higher studies in uk. I love to be part of national health service in uk, i really got attached emotionally to the working subjective of the NHS.

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IELTS essay About my future plans and life style

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

92 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

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