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I think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Because I do not want to spend time on choosing commodities. I think that there are two types of people around the world. One type is person who want to spend time on thinking. They do not care to time. Also, they like to shopping. Second type is person who do not want to spend time on thinking. They care to time and efficiency. Also, they do not like shopping and like doing something that is not shopping. I am second type. I like reading, drawing, and listening to music. I want to do many thing. But I have to do in a limited time. So I can not take time on choosing. I want to advertising that I know once. It is annoying to see many times. For example TV commercial message and flyer. If it is interesting, I do not feel annoying. But this pattern is rare. Also I think advertising should be that we no longer attention to it. Because it is best of benefit. One type of people do not like to take time on it too. Every one want to some that it is easy to understand for everyone. If you want to eat pizza, you will open browser and enter pizza. You will not check the advertising. If pizza advertising is seen morning, anyone ask the pizza. So advertising should be seen suitable time. Also we can not record the advertising that we watched in the morning. I can not do it at least. I think that it is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
I
think
that advertising is
so
common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Because
I do not
want
to spend
time
on choosing commodities.

I
think
that there are two
types
of
people
around the world. One
type
is person who
want
to spend
time
on thinking. They do not care to
time
.
Also
, they like to shopping. Second
type
is person who do not
want
to spend
time
on thinking. They care to
time
and efficiency.
Also
, they do not like shopping and like doing something
that is
not shopping.

I am second
type
. I like reading, drawing, and listening to music.
I
want
to do
many thing
.
But
I
have to
do in a limited
time
.
So
I can not take
time
on choosing. I
want
to
advertising
that I know once.

It is annoying to
see
many
times
.
For example
TV commercial message and flyer. If it is interesting, I do not feel annoying.
But
this pattern is rare.

Also
I
think
advertising should be that we no longer attention to it.
Because
it is best of benefit. One
type
of
people
do not like to take
time
on it too. Every one
want
to
some
that it is easy to understand for everyone.

If you
want
to eat pizza, you will open browser and enter pizza. You will not
check
the advertising. If pizza advertising is
seen
morning, anyone
ask
the pizza.
So
advertising should be
seen
suitable
time
.
Also
we can not record the advertising that we
watched
in the morning. I can not do it at least.

I
think
that it is
so
common that we no longer pay attention to it.
What do you think?
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IELTS essay About advertising discussions

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