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a typical day in university

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Regular days a week at Van Lang University, I usually have a subject at 9: 00 am. However, my home is quite far from school, I wake up and am away from home early. After the lesson, I with 3 college friends eat lunch. Perhaps noodles, rice or just drink boba milk tea. Depending on the day, we will have classes in the afternoon or not. Unless classes, we will hang out and keep eating. As a result, we weight gain a lot. It’s sad but true because we eat every time one day. Despite going to university to study but I remember exactly, we almost interact with each other and hang out. We say goodbye around 10: 00 pm and the next day will continue like this.
Regular days a week at Van Lang University, I
usually
have a subject at 9: 00 am.
However
, my home is quite far from school, I wake up and am away from home early. After the lesson, I with 3 college friends eat lunch. Perhaps noodles, rice or
just
drink
boba
milk tea. Depending on the day, we will have classes in the afternoon or not. Unless classes, we will hang out and
keep
eating.
As a result
, we weight gain a lot. It’s sad
but
true
because
we eat every time one day. Despite going to university to study
but
I remember exactly, we almost interact with each other and hang out. We say goodbye around 10: 00 pm and the
next
day will continue like this.
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IELTS essay a typical day in university

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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