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a time you made friends in an unusual circumstance

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Everyone has a span of time to make friends in his or her lifetime, and I am not an exception also. Becoming a friend to a stranger is somehow magic, but it is much more interesting when it happens uncommonly. I am the number one to have unusual situations. A year ago I was an all-nighter enrollee, that's why I could not manage everything that I wanted to have in my early eight-teens. It was life without entertainment, clubs, hanging-outs. Because of the pandemic Covid-19, there was not any chance to go courses; however, we had to pass entering exams to university. To avoid being failed I started to study independently with online resources until I found a teacher. He was the only teacher, who could simply explain any complex theory without misunderstandings. I had such respect for him which can not be explicated with words. One day I faced in his telegram channel explanation of syntaxes, but there was a girl who insulted him. I got angry and I wrote to her personally to treat her in her way, but I realized that she could not catch the meaning of his words. I teach her the topic, after that she said sorry to me and my teacher. We became good friends. I taught her online, as a result, she became a student as I did. We met each other on 10th February remembering the stupid situation with a laugh.
Everyone has a span of time to
make
friends in
his or her
lifetime, and I am not an exception
also
. Becoming a friend to a stranger is somehow magic,
but
it is much more interesting when it happens
uncommonly
. I am the number one to have unusual situations.

A year ago I was an all-nighter
enrollee
, that's why I could not manage everything that I wanted to have in my early eight-teens. It was life without entertainment, clubs, hanging-outs.
Because
of the pandemic Covid-19, there was not any chance to go courses;
however
, we had to pass entering exams to university. To avoid
being failed
I
started
to study
independently
with online resources until I found a teacher. He was the
only
teacher, who could
simply
explain
any complex theory without misunderstandings. I had such respect for him which can not
be explicated
with words.

One day I faced in his telegram channel explanation of
syntaxes
,
but
there was a girl who insulted him. I
got
angry and I wrote to her
personally
to treat her in her way,
but
I realized that she could not catch the meaning of his words. I teach her the topic, after that she said sorry to me and my teacher. We became
good
friends. I taught her online,
as a result
, she became a student as I did. We met each other on 10th February remembering the stupid situation with a laugh.
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IELTS essay a time you made friends in an unusual circumstance

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240 words
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