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A study covering information about the process of making tomato ketchup shows that manufacturing tomato consists of 15 steps.

A study covering information about the process of making tomato ketchup shows that manufacturing tomato consists of 15 steps. g8LAA

First of all, worker pick tomatoes and put in basket. After that they are divided into 2 parts good and bad. Thirdly, good tomatoes send to factory to made ketchup. In the next stages, skin, stalk and seeds of tomatoes removed. Subsequently, peeled tomatoes put into container, and then they crushed. To the crushed tomatoes add sugar, vinegar and salt. Following this it is boiled and leave for 2 hours, and at this point it becomes ready for packaging. The following step is that, ketchup poured into special bottle and it becomes labeled. In the next step their quality is checked, and the selected ketchups packed into boxes. Once the ketchups has been packed into boxes, the boxes are the loaded onto a lorry. Next, boxes send to the supermarket. After being taken to supermarkets, the boxes of ketchups are then sold to consumers. Finally, it becomes ready for eating with fast foods.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, worker pick tomatoes and put in basket. After that they are divided
 into 2 parts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. Thirdly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 tomatoes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to factory to made You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
. In the next
 stages, skin, stalk and seeds of tomatoes removed. Subsequently
, peeled tomatoes put into container, and then they crushed. To the crushed tomatoes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 sugar, vinegar and salt. Following this it is boiled
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for 2 hours, and at this point it becomes ready for packaging.

The following step is that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 poured into special bottle and it becomes labeled. In the next
 step their quality is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
, and the selected Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupketch ups
ketchups
 packed into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcartoncratepacktrunkpackage
boxes
. Once the Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupketch ups
ketchups
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boxes
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcartoncratepacktrunkpackage
boxes
 are the loaded onto a lorry. Next
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcartoncratepacktrunkpackage
boxes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to the supermarket. After being taken
 to supermarkets, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcartoncratepacktrunkpackage
boxes
 of Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupketch ups
ketchups
 are then sold to consumers. Finally
, it becomes ready for eating with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 foods. 