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A song "I have been along with you inside my mind and in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand times."

A song "I have been along with you inside my mind and in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand times. " qQDqX
It's amazing how you can speak right to my heart. Without saying a word you can light up the dark. Try as I mean I could never explain; what I hear when you don't say a thing. The smile on your face lets me know that you love me. There's a truth in your eyes saying You will never leave me. The touch of hand says you will catch me whenever I fall; You say it best when you say nothing at all. I have been along with you inside my mind and in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand time. Sometimes I see you pass outside my door; Hello is it me you are looking for? Cause I wonder where you are and I wonder what you do! Are you feeling lonely or is someone loving you. May be it's intuition, something I just don't question. Although loneliness has always been a friend of mine. I am living my life in your hands
It's amazing how you can speak right to my heart. Without saying a word you can light up the dark. Try as I mean I could never
explain
; what I hear when you don't say a thing. The smile on your face
lets
me know that you
love
me. There's a truth in your eyes saying You will never
leave
me. The touch of hand says you will catch me whenever I fall; You say it best when you say nothing at all.

I have been along with you inside my mind and in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand time.
Sometimes
I
see
you pass outside my door; Hello is it me you are looking for?
Cause I
wonder where you are and I wonder what you do! Are you feeling lonely or is someone loving you.

May
be it's intuition
, something I
just
don't question.

Although
loneliness has always been a friend of mine. I am living my life in your
hands
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IELTS essay A song "I have been along with you inside my mind and in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand times. "

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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