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a review about high school musical

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Zac Efron and Vanessa Anne Hudgens star in this Disney film as popular basketball team captain Troy, and smart stunning academic Gabriella, both shock the members of the social cliques to which they belong when they each decide to audition for the high schools musical by proving themselves to be brilliant performers. Can these two teens lead their peers towards more openminded thinking and acceptance of one another? High school musical is a family appropriate feature filled with hip music, popular dance moves, and tons of school spirit.
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star in this Disney film as popular basketball team captain Troy, and smart stunning academic Gabriella, both shock the members of the social cliques to which they belong when they each decide to audition for the high schools musical by proving themselves to be brilliant performers. Can these two teens lead their peers towards more
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thinking and acceptance of one another? High school musical is a family appropriate feature filled with hip music, popular dance
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, and tons of school spirit.
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IELTS essay a review about high school musical

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  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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