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A report: About your company. how staff feel about the company what people in the local community think about the company what the company should do to improve its image.

A report: About your company. how staff feel about the company what people in the local community think about the company what the company should do to improve its image. 0AG03

Report for my company. We as staff are working harder everyday to make the company grow in the sector, Furthermore we are getting the number one on sales, but there is parts that can be improve. Firstly, staff work more hours than they should and they don't receive any reward for their sacrifies, also they are tired and they feel like the company don't see their effort even when they don't stop working without rest. Secondly, people in the local community, in other hand, are really happy with how the company it is growing, we have made a solid customers that come buy here everyday, Nevertheless, they can notice the tired face of the staff that work here and that something that can have an effect in the next time they come. Thirly, and last, in my opinion to improve the company, I think the staff and employees need to be pay the extra hours they work, also like everybody they need some rest too.

Report for my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

We as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 are working harder 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 grow in the sector, Furthermore
 we are getting the number one on sales, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Did you mean "there are parts"?there are parts
there is parts
 that can be Consider using the past participle "improved"?improved
improve
.

Firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 work more hours than they Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).should, and
should and
 they don't receive any reward for their Possible spelling mistake found.sacrificesscarifies
sacrifies
, also
 they are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tired, and
tired and
 they feel like the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 their effort even when they don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 working without rest.

Secondly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the local community, in other hand, are really
 happy with how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 it is growing, we have made a solid Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "customer"?customer
customers
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 here 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
, Nevertheless
, they can notice the tired face of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 that work here and that something that can have an effect in the next
 time they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
.

Possible spelling mistake found.ThirtyThinlyThirdlyTwirly
Thirly
, and last, in my opinion to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforcepersonnelteamwork forcecrewcadre
staff
 and employees need to be pay the extra hours they work, also
 like everybody they need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 rest too. 